Thursday, September 9, 2010

Unwritten- the previous draft (P)

I woke up today
I saw things unsecured
teetering on a shelf above.
Things that, if fallen,
would still exist;
things that would need mending.


(changed a lot, didn't it :))
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  1. A Writing StrawberryOctober 27, 2010 at 4:45 PM

    I like it! It's short and concise and you know exactly what it means. reminds me of an Emily Dickinson, minus the dashes and random capitalization. :)

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